Alright. So that is the title of the story I am currently writing. Oh, that's just tempory, probaby. But untill I come up with something different, and or better, then it's
Blurred. Here's the current idea/blurb thing I have for it.
India-Rose. Shot dead at the age seventeen, she is stuck in the world of the living and the dead as a ghost. India is given a mission to redeem the opposing qualities of Heaven in order to move on from the strange world she is stuck in.
Isaac Cain. Forced to live with the death of his family and the strange ability to see the death of people who are stuck in the world of the living and dead.
An impossible mission.
Irresistible choices.
Can India save Isaac’s soul before it’s too late?
Does it sound too, cliche? Or, i dunno, corny? Please tell me if it does :)
I haven't written much yet, but here's the Prolouge for you;
From the moment the bullet plunged through my chest, I knew was dead and that there was nothing I could do about it. After long agonizing moments the pain slipped away and blackness encased my in its tight grasp.
I was dead, and the peaceful stretched endlessly out in front of me and I briefly wondered if there was a God waiting for me on the other side, or if there was a heaven.
There was.
I could see it, see its marvelling beauty. I stretched out my hand out, wanting to touch it, to have it clenched between my fists. But something cut me off sharply and I was thrown back into the swirling oblivion of blackness.
100 YEARS LATER:
I stood in the middle of the graveyard, holding my hands palm up, my eyes closed. A slight breeze swayed the trees and eerie whistling sound running through the trees.
The full moon was right ahead of me, silvery moonlight falling over my hands.
I muttered the words under my breath that would send me to my final peace. Or so I had hoped. The wind rose to a scream and my eyes flew open. I was staring at a tall cloaked figure, that was of course a transparent silvery colour, the same shade of silver as the moon.
She smiled at me, her long hair falling over her shoulder. I looked at her expectantly and I let my hands fall back to my sides.
‘I think I can safely presume that you wish to move on?’
She asked her voice light and silverly like a soft cloud floating gracefully through the sky.
‘Yes,’ I whispered, my voice edged with eagerness. ‘I want to leave.’ She laughed again, shaking her head slowly back and forth.
‘Unfortunately, that cannot be arranged.’ My mouth gaped open in mute horror.
‘Why not?’ I asked, outraged. She smiled wider.
‘Because,’ she said, like she was explaining something to a two year old ‘you have done things in your life that Heaven will not tolerate.’ fury lashed my insides, clawing at my throat.
I swallowed it down with some difficultly.
What had I done to deserve an eternity of stuck here? Sure, I had bullied people, ruined people’s lives. But so what? I had been killed unfairly, if I might say so. Murdered might be the better term to use.
I used to be popular, blonde, vain and cruel. I felt no shame or remorse for what I’ve done in my lifetime and I was proud of what I’d done. But then I had been killed in a downtown shooting when I was out with some friends and my life had crashed painfully down to the floor.
‘So what? I’m stuck in this hell hole?’ I replied, crossing my arms. She shrugged the smile still in place. It looked friendly enough; but I thought I could see a touch of amusement to it. I glowered at her.
‘I wouldn’t compare the Land of The Living to Hell, there quite different in comparison. But I am willing to give you a second chance.’
‘Yeah?’ I grunted, not impressed with her offer. ‘And what do I have to do?’ he lifted a shoulder in a half shrug.
‘Well.’ She began, and a glint of hope flashed briefly in her eyes. ‘I have a mission for you.’
I laughed openly
Yeah? What do you want me to do, old lady. Anything to get me outta here.’ I snickered. He face remained expressionless.
‘I want you to save his Soul.’ Were the only things she said. The smile slipped from my face.
‘Whose?’ I asked, confused. The woman smiled mysteriously.
‘As soon as you see him, you’ll know.’ She gave me one last smile of hope, and then vanished, leaving a small necklace at her feet.
I picked it up, the stone cool in my fingers. It was beautiful, so I slipped it over my head. I gasped in surprise and looked at my arms. The moonlight no fell in with my silvery skin, but over pale, normal, human looking skin.
I looked like I had to go out in public. I took a step forward and almost fell over again. I felt so heavy, not the light floating sensation that I normally felt. I took another step forward but this time I regained my balance.
I noticed a thick roll of paper out of the corner of my eyes. Curious I picked it up.
It was an enrolment form for the local high school, just around the corner from the old, abandoned house I spent most of my time at. School?
Ahh. Didn’t that bring back sweet memories?
A grin slowly spread across my face and I tucked in into the jacket I was wearing.
This was going to be fun. Here I come school, I’m on my way.
I might change some of it, but thats what it is going to be for now, if you want to read some more, here's da link :P
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/256711-blurred